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There is so much to me, and yet i have such a longlong way to go. I am still discovering myself...everyday i will tell u something more about me

Wednesday, September 20, 2006

coffee and cranes

sipping coffee in the pantry,
a dozen snow white cranes
with perfect hour glass figures
glide across the horizon


Blogger The Beast said...


3:47 AM, September 21, 2006  
Blogger anu said...


7:47 AM, September 21, 2006  
Blogger Pierre Turlur said...

Another version of your beautiful poem:

"Sipping dark coffee
snow white cranes glide
over the horizon"



2:57 PM, September 29, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

Wow how beautiful the poem seems now. Thanks Pierre

12:09 AM, October 01, 2006  
Blogger Pierre Turlur said...

no, Anu, your poem is perfect. It is just another way...By the way, I left a post talking about you on my blog.



7:15 PM, October 01, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

Thank you for your lovely words about myself, Pierre. I love your poetry and the calmness I feel, while I visit you on your blog.

7:39 PM, October 01, 2006  

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