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There is so much to me, and yet i have such a longlong way to go. I am still discovering myself...everyday i will tell u something more about me

Sunday, July 30, 2006

free

you stand so tall on the ground,
stubborn is your love for her
and straightforward is your approach

yet you let her flirt with the sky
dance dirty with the wind
go berserk with her feelings and emotions

you're love is so free and so easy, coconut tree
you don't need to own her, posess her and promise to her
your palm leaves kiss the stars in the sky,
yet her love roots are burried deep in your heart
infact she sprouts from you...free!

9 Comments:

Blogger Johnny Newt said...

Su prabhat Mere dost .
I hope that is correct. Your last few poems have been fragrance to my ears, so good to read you again. Your words and visions are...kayaa kahanaa ! Hope you are well and loved often. A dream I had the other night made me think of you. I was somewhere in India and was just about to enter a shimmering grove of sandle wood trees, there were many gathered there with fowers and golden bowls full of fruit and and beautiful offerings ,so many brilliant colors and birds were singing and the whole forest seemed to vibrate with joy.
It was so blissful, i'm sure you where there among the glistening trees. :)

7:34 PM, July 31, 2006  
Blogger The Beast said...

Johny: Wow, that just makes me think about moving to India :-)

Anu: She is free, but what about him?

7:41 AM, August 01, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

Wow Johnny, I'm impressed! What a wonderful surprise. Boy, I'm so delighted to see you :))

Johnny, I must've been the tree on which the birds perch, the creepers grow, green leaves dance and fruits hang. I must've been that tree which stoops down towards the glass mirror lake almost smooching it :)

Beast - He was always free, Beast. He owns noone.

9:36 PM, August 01, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

Johnny, India has blocked blogger after the recent terrorist attacks and hence I'm using a proxy server to view my own blog and other blogs. For some reason (and I don't know what)I am unable to comment on your blog.

If you're comfortable, will you forward me your email address so that I can mail you my feelings about your posts?

9:54 PM, August 01, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

I managed to comment afterall, Johnny :)

11:42 PM, August 01, 2006  
Blogger sonia said...

Nice poetry. I like it very much. I am linking to your blog.

1:54 AM, August 02, 2006  
Blogger Steve said...

I love that poem, anu.
That is so beautiful.
Love is not about "detachment" or indifference
(like coming apart at the roots),
but about "non-attachment."

Follow the link to understand what I mean. :)

Can I put this same poem you wrote
on my website, and expound upon it more
from my personal point of view?

10:34 AM, August 02, 2006  
Blogger Johnny Newt said...

So glad you are able to comment, Anu
I am suprised to hear about blogger being blocked. I will send you my e-mail so we will be able to keep in touch when you are unable to use blogger.

8:07 PM, August 02, 2006  
Blogger anu said...

Hi Sonia. Thank you for linking me. I've marked you too in my favorites folder. I'm not familiar with blogger to create corresponding links on my blog, so please excuse me for that.

Steve, thanks for the link. I'll check it out. Please feel free to post the poem on your blog, afterall the title itself is 'free'...so it is owned by noone. :)

Thank you Johnny, I wouldn't want to ever lose touch with you :)

9:38 PM, August 02, 2006  

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