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There is so much to me, and yet i have such a longlong way to go. I am still discovering myself...everyday i will tell u something more about me

Thursday, December 29, 2005

sun rays

sunrays in parallel lines
falling on my bedsheets

millions of dust particles
floating in it randomly
sparkling like diamonds

like a child i tried
clasping the rays
in my fist

empty fist
filled heart
(en)lighted face


Blogger Amrit said...

me first :)

hey cold gone frm nowhere to nowhere good to know that
enjoy the day at office
make plans for new year party

have a gr8 day
take care

9:27 AM, December 29, 2005  
Blogger madhavan said...

sparkle away anustory
sparkle like the diamond
sparkle like the child
who catches rays of light
and ends with stars in hand

10:10 AM, December 29, 2005  
Blogger Yemanja said...

It's been a while Anu! The simplicity of this poem is very real to me now!

It's lovely!


12:55 PM, December 29, 2005  
Blogger anu said...

Amrit - everytime i look up for beaches i sneeze ;-) Thanks Amrit .

Madhavan - wow i love stars..always been fascinated by them. Not film stars but the stars in the sky. So romantic it is :)

Yemanja - I understand. Hugs. Be well Yemanja. Thank you for your kind words. :)

11:19 PM, December 29, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i love this poem, anu! you are an amazing person too, you are so honest and forthright and you have so many sides to you that you are not afraid to reveal. i do hope one day we meet, sister.--blue

1:01 AM, December 30, 2005  
Blogger Real-E said...

Nice writing - I could feel the warmth on such a dark winter's day.

5:21 AM, December 30, 2005  
Blogger Michael said...

Beautiful poem, Anu!

8:07 AM, December 30, 2005  
Blogger Nonedone said...

You read (and wrote) my mind!

Well done, that's what's gone on in my head every afternoon I've lazed on my bed.

7:36 PM, December 30, 2005  
Blogger anu said...

Bluuuuuueeee - hugs :)

Real-E - Is it so cold there? that its a 'dark' day?

Michael - Thanks :)

Nonedone - i had just woken up in the morning when i saw the rays :)

10:47 PM, December 30, 2005  

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